by Blue Sow <janet.read@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>
May 18, 2007 at 05:53 PM
Skipper wrote:
> In article <464d98cf$0$19228$fa0fcedb@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
>, Blue Sow
> <janet.read@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote:
>
>> This was my first attempt at the form.
>> My primary objective was to observe 'the rules'.
>>
>>
>> Captain Spoon looked out.
>> She saw the snow on the ground
>> and she turned away.
>>
>>
>> Perhaps someone would like to post a 'better' example.
>
>
> Afternoon in autumn
> Winding lifting leaves, one floats free
> Spirit tells this is a special life
Is that your own?
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Blue Sow