Re: who can help me correct my language?

Eva wrote:
>    The following is part of my master's thesis. Can you help me
> correct my language? The format needn't correcting. Thank you so much.
> 
>

Excellent. The only change I would make is to the sentence "The images 
of China, as said by Raymond Dawson in The Chinese Chameleon: An Analysis
of European Conceptions of Chinese Civilization, are like a 
color-changing chameleon."

That comes across as a bit clumsy, and would be (to my mind) better 
turned round to the simpler form, "Raymond Dawson described the image of 
China as like a color- changing chameleon in The ..."

JS